Talk:Discussion Area/@comment-25141424-20140712160545/@comment-25141865-20140712160941

まとめありがとうございます.

I'd like to tell you my opinion. In my opinion,〜

とすると少々くどい気がするので、In my opinion, は削った方がいいかもしれません.

またtaking the following states into considerationとThere are 4 reasons for thisも意味がかぶっているので、taking the following four states into considerationもしくはThere are four reasons for this based on present situation のようにしたほうがいいかもしれません.